A moment in time 
There is a man he is on a holiday. He is bird watching
and taking photos he is sitting down he looks like he is enjoying it, in the
background there is green short grass and bushes, with sand on the sand
are some weeds. It looks like a nice day with
a bit of wind, and he is wearing a light green T-shirt, blue denim shorts,
bright red janand a black belt and on his arm it looks like he has a tattoo, and his hair is black, short and curly. He looks like he is really concentrating on the birds. On the sand it looks like there is a camera all the birds in the sky look beautiful and he was trying to get the perfect photo but the birds won't stay still the birds look like they seagulls the seagulls look like they are making heaps of noise the birds look big and their beaks are long and black.The man looks like he has know food or water with him. And there are heaps of birds and in the bush if you look carefully there is a big brown duck.
There is a man he is on a holiday. He is bird watching
and taking photos he is sitting down he looks like he is enjoying it, in the
background there is green short grass and bushes, with sand on the sand
are some weeds. It looks like a nice day with
a bit of wind, and he is wearing a light green T-shirt, blue denim shorts,
bright red janand a black belt and on his arm it looks like he has a tattoo, and his hair is black, short and curly. He looks like he is really concentrating on the birds. On the sand it looks like there is a camera all the birds in the sky look beautiful and he was trying to get the perfect photo but the birds won't stay still the birds look like they seagulls the seagulls look like they are making heaps of noise the birds look big and their beaks are long and black.The man looks like he has know food or water with him. And there are heaps of birds and in the bush if you look carefully there is a big brown duck.
Although he would have had fun
THE END
Sophie:I like the way you described the background like the things around himbut maybe next time you could not use as much and's.
Hi Ellie,
ReplyDeleteI am Nadia from St Patricks school in Greymouth. I really enjoyed looking through your moment in time it was very interesting. I have done one like this that I have on my blog. Maybe next time you could shrink the words so you could see them better.
Blog ya latter!!